Newbury Park: Jan 7th 2004 Time: 1:00pm
FADE IN
Ext: Driveway – Daytime
Tony, 40, exits his house with his bible and mobile phone in his hand. He walks to the end of his drive and looks up and down the empty road. Tony turns around and heads towards his car on the middle of the driveway. Tony opens the car and enters.
Int: Car – Daytime
As he gets into the car he places his bible and mobile phone on the passenger seat
He looks up into the rear view mirror and fixes his tie which had become slightly crooked. As he fumbles with his tie his mobile phone rings, he looks at the name on the screen it’s his daughter Angelina, he answers it.
Tony
(Calmly)
Hello Angi
Angelina
(On the phone)
Dad, where are you?
Tony
On my way, start without me, will be there shortly, need to offload something
He hangs up the phone and places it back on the passengers seat, he opens the glove compartment and takes out a CD, there is a thud, Tony turns his head around in the direction of the noise but cant see anything, The banging continues getting louder.
Ext: Driveway – Daytime
He turns back around and opens the car door. He leaves the car and walks town the side towards the boot leaving the front door open. Tony then kneels down and looks underneath the car and finds nothing there. He gets back up and dusts his knees and walks to the boot.
The banging noise gets louder and clearer. He looks up and down the street making sure no-one is around. He then opens the car boot and looks inside to find a girl tied up. The girl is struggling to get free. Tony looks at her and grins.
Tony
I thought I told you to stop making noise
The girl in the boot lets out a shriek as Tony punches her and closes the boot on her.
FADE OUT
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